Post by Jessamyn
Ashamed Fox Icy Crayfish Damp Pony Thanks for tagging me, this article seems mostly fine (keeping in mind I only sort of understand it). I think my only suggestion at this point would be to try to put some of the "notable" aspects of it up top. Like "Oh Microsoft is using it?" "It's a big part of IoT architecture?" Maybe get some specificity or stats in that last sentence in the lede to answer the "Why should I care?" knee-jerk nerd response. Drop that in and ping me back, I can approve it.
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Ashamed Fox Icy Crayfish Damp Pony Other suggestions (even though I think it's fine) would be to tighten it up some just to get it across the finish line, maybe have it be more dull and encylopedia, slightly less detailed (save those notes, add them in slowly later) to what is supported by reliable non-CHERI mentions. Again, this is just "how to play the game" advice, not any critique on the article which seems fine.
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