#WritersCoffeeClub 3/2 How accurately does your first line represent your style and voice? "Jib’s mother always warned him to stay away from caterpillars." I don't even know why, but this seems to fit for Jib's #WIP "The fires never died in the king’s hall of Cantre’r Gwaelod." mmmmeh...kinda bland? This is for Taliesin B2. I want something mystical and just a little dark (dimmed?), but without being too vague and generic. I think that one's gonna get a re-write.